Thursday, February 28, 2013

Picture

Students were asked to write a piece based on the picture "Lighting up the Sky"

The Northern Lights
By: Gabrielle Thompson
2-28-2013


The Northern lights . . . What a beautiful sight!
"Mom, how is that possible?" said the girl.  "I am not sure honey," replied the mom.  
I sat there on the rock admiring it.  How? I would ask myself . . . how is this possible?  On our planet?  I thought this only happened in stories - I was wrong.  

Then this girl comes up to me and says, "you know how this is possible?"
"No, I don't," I replied.
"Magic," she says as she runs off, "it's magic?"

What does that mean?  Magic like spells and witches?  Or magic like your eyes playing tricks?  Whatever it means, it's beautiful.  The Northern Lights are amazing.

Friday, February 15, 2013

Free Friday: Free Writes

If I Were A Car . . .
By: Madison Anzaldi
2-15-2013


If I were a car,
I'd be a Lamborghini.
I'd pull up to the track
Wearing only a Bikini.

I"d race on the track,
Winning titles as I go,
Slowness is what I lack,
Other cars - they'd have to tow!

I'd speed in the  night,
Feeling the tar beneath my wheels.
I'd always be in the spotlight,
I'd be the center of major deals!

I'd have millions in my trunk,
That I've won from every race.
I wouldn't get any junk,
I would keep up my pace.

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Random Words

Students were asked to incorporate the following five words within their journal entries: Bicycle, River, Full-moon, Thread, Pebbles



Random Words
Gabby Frantz
2-14-2013

Down by the river where the full-moon shines
So quiet so sweet and so magical all the time.
Up-up in the sky, 
Stars like pebbles, that shine proud and majestic, unlike any kind
As skinny as a thread
That you cannot see
As fast as a bike
The sky is so beautiful to me

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Short Stories Demonstrating Mastery of Litearature Terms

Catching the Moon
By: Kame McComas
1-27-2013

I remember being so excited we got a white Christmas - I was only nine.  My mom had work early in the morning, so my dad and I had to wait until she got home to open presents.  It was like the presents were taunting me all day, screaming, 'open me!'  Ugh!  I hated it.

Late that night we got a call saying my mom got in an accident on her way home.  It was ironic, why Christmas?  Why ever?  I was taken by surprise.  When we went to visit her that night though she was tired - yet she stayed up talking to me, telling me funny rhymes and things to cheer me up: "my Marley makes me mischievous," she sang, smiling weakly.  She was like the sun, so bright.  She was the happy ending in a story, you never want to end.  I always and positively loved her.

"You're so bright, keep up the fight," I cried, making her smile because I was trying to cheer her up.  I felt deafening silence take over as she closed her eyes for a moment, then opened them.  "Look, it's a full moon Marley," she said.  I smiled.  We would always sit outside during a full moan.  I held my thumb up towards the moon looking out the window, my mom taught me no matter where you are in the world, the moon is never bigger than your thumb.  "Honey," my dad said.  I looked at him, he had glossy eyes, looking down at mom who's eyes were closed.

                                                        ____  ____  ____  ____  ____

I"m now ten and tonight it's Christmas, a white Christmas.  I went outside, it was about seven.  I wrapped my jacket tightly around me and sat on the porch.  It was a full moon again this Christmas.  I held my thumb up towards the moon, it felt like she was with me again.  Her trick gave more meaning now, because it's like she never left, when there's a full moon - she's sitting next to me.  I was touching the moon, it felt amazing.


The Delay
By: Jessica Burke
1-27-2013

Jennifer sat in the back of the taxi cab waiting, anxiously and impatiently. Blocking out the sounds of all the honking cars that were also trying to figure out what the holdup was and how to get past it. Becoming a slight bit angry, Jennifer asked the man driving if there were back roads or ways around to the airport, he said no. So she sat and waited a little longer until she decided that she couldn’t wait any more. She hopped out of the cab and grabbed her things from the trunk and threw the man a twenty dollar bill and began running in the freezing cold snow. She heard the wind whistling in her ear as she ran. She was a block away and could just barely see it now.
Finally she was there and stopped in front of the doors to take a breath, and then started running again. She rushed as fast as she could until she had to stop at the airport security. She quickly took off all the medal she was wearing and walked through the detector and was cleared. She
grabbed her belongings and once again began running. Out of nowhere, a
security guard stopped her.

  “Excuse me ma’am, there is no running in the airport. You wouldn’t believe how many times I have to tell people that in one day.” He informed her.
“I am so sorry sir, but I am late for my flight and I can’t miss it.” She answered him as innocently as she could.

The man just grunted as if he didn’t even care and slowly walked away. Jennifer walked for a few seconds and then gradually regained her speed. Finally she had made it to the door that lead out to her plane, Flight 108, but they were already closed. 
“Did this flight already take off? Did I miss it?” Jennifer asked the lady at the desk, after she caught her breath one last time.
“No ma’am. This flight has actually been delayed because of the snow storm,” the woman answered. “If you would like you may wait here in one of our lovely and comfortable chairs,” says the woman, as she pointed behind Jennifer to the seating area.
“Great.” Jennifer mumbles under her breath in a sarcastic tone as she turns around to go have a seat. So Jennifer sits down and gets herself situated, then pulls out her laptop and begins to work. All of a sudden a man sitting across from her says, “Jenny? Jenny Macklin? Is that you?”
Jennifer looks up and is stunned. She is like a deer in headlights, she has absolutely not motion, and no words. He says again “Jenny, it’s me, Andrew.”
“I...I...I know it’s you Andrew, I just can’t believe that I am seeing you, running into you like this. I thought my odds of every seeing you again would be like seeing a polar bear in Florida…. something extremely rare. Oh, and I just go by Jennifer now.” She said in a confused and strange voice.
Andrew and Jennifer continued talking for a while, and eventually Jennifer became more relaxed and calm about seeing Andrew, until he brought up the romantic phase of their history together. Jennifer and Andrew were high school sweethearts. Like in a typical movie, Andrew was the captain and quarterback of the football team, most popular guy in school, and the prom king. Jennifer was the captain of the cheerleading squad, most popular girl in school, and of course, the prom queen. Their relationship was almost perfect, right until Jennifer broke it off to move to New Jersey.
“Do you remember prom night?” he asked her while he gazed off into the air as if he were imagining it. “The blue sea theme, the white strobe lights, your beautiful blue dress that matched the entire place, as always you looked gorgeous!” and he started to smile and laugh a bit.
 Suddenly everything became awkward and silent again. She told him about the security guard stopping her; she said he is a grumpy monster with no feeling. Changing the subject as quickly as possible once again, because Andrew had not responded to her, Jennifer asks him what he is doing as a profession. 
“I am actually an online blogger.” He told her, proud of his job.
 Jennifer’s eyes widened, she smiled so wide, and she began giggling. Wondering what was so funny about that, Andrew asked Jennifer, “What? Why are you smiling so big? Why is that so good?”
She just kept smiling and then finally said, “You know it would be hilarious if you were “Dreamer.” Then Andrew’s eyes widened. “I am.” He replied.”Wait a minute! Don’t tell me that you are ‘Jz1D?”
“I am….” She said extremely shocked “I love typing the top topics of today’s life thrills.” “Dreamer” and “Jz1D” were the two most popular and well known bloggers in New Jersey. They were becoming so popular that their fans declared a blogging war. “Dreamer” and “Jz1D” had been trying to figure out who the other blogger was but they couldn’t. All real names are secretive in the blogging world. “This is so horribly-perfect!!! Now I know who “Dreamer” is but... I just can’t believe it’s you, Andrew.” Jennifer stated to him.
Both were still just sitting there in shock when the front desk lady came on the intercom and announced that the doors for Flight 108 would now be opening, and plane will be ready for departure in 15 minutes.
 So, Jennifer stood up and once again grabbed all of her belongings. “Goodbye Andrew. This was actually kind of fun.” And she walked away without another word. She wanted to turn around but just couldn’t, she wanted to stay and talk to Andrew but just couldn’t, so she kept walking. She made her way back up to the desk and started talking to the woman again, this time calmer and nicer. Jennifer had asked her where she had gotten her scarf from. “Oh, wow! I just love your scarf, some of the styles you see nowadays just make a person want to barf!” The woman laughed and thanked Jennifer.
Out of nowhere they heard a man screaming, “Wait! Wait! Wait! You can’t leave! Wait!” Jennifer turned around and saw Andrew screaming and running after her. He made it to her and said, “I can’t just let you slip out of my hands again. Please take me back.” There life was always like a romance movie, perfect jobs, perfect love, and perfect life. But not this time, this time there was no happy ending to the story.
She gave him a small, quick smile and with the entire airport staring that them she said, “No.” All the people gasped. “I will not come back to you.” Before he could even get another word out she turned around and boarded her plane. He couldn’t even speak, he was so embarrassed. His face was red, and his heart was shattered. He just stood there, stunned. Finally he turned back around with his head hanging low, and walked back to his seat where he plopped down and began writing to his blogger fans about his past love “Jz1D.” He wrote of their first date, their prom date, their break up, and their airport run in. But not once did he mention that his past love was the blogger “Jz1D”. When Jennifer got home she sat down and read his latest post. She couldn’t believe he had told all of their fans about it. Then, she realized it might help them both and she told all of their fans through a post that she was the woman that
 “Dreamer” had been talking about in his last post. 
The fans loved the idea of a blogging romance, but it never happened. Andrew continued blogging about Jennifer and calling her and tried anything he possibly could to get her back, she kept saying no. When she finished her post, she closed her laptop and went into her living room to help her newly wedded husband with their newborn baby boy, Andrew.


Molly Ray Sunshine
By: Elijah Swartzfager
1-27-2013

One sunny, spring morning, I was climbing country cat's cages - then climbing out of my dream and out of bed.  I found Molly laying on the end of my bed.  We went to the front of the house and turned on the TV and played my X-Box.  Molly was the best dog I ever had; she was a yellow lab with a soft, furry coat, and dark brown eyes.  She was the nicest dog ever and she never barked, never bit, never hurt anyone . . . unless they tried to hurt me or my family.

Then, one dark day, me and Molly were eating lunch and I wanted to go for a walk.  I didn't put her on a leash, which wasn't the first time, because she didn't need one.  We were walking to the park when a dog barked, wanting to play fetch with her and her favorite stick.  Molly was like a sibling to me.  She was more beautiful than any other dog I've ever seen, more beautiful than a starry night sky. 

We were at the park and I got her stick out and played fetch.  We played for a few hours, before we headed home.  We were just crossing the road, when everyone around me seemed to know something that I didn't . . . and then it happened . . . Crack! Bump! Bump!  Molly Ray Sunshine was hit by a truck.

It's been a while since my dog died.  I finally got the courage to go downstairs and eat something.  When I was eating, I realized something . . . It's time to go.  I grabbed my jacket and my bible and ran to Molly's grace.  I read her stories and prayed everyday when I got home from school.  I wish, I just wish, I could go back in time and do it all over again - but I can't, so until we meet again, "I'll always miss you, goodbye Molly Ray Sunshine."


My Dog is an Evil Cat
By: Frank Smith
1-27-2013

My dog, Cerberus, is most likely an evil cat because he did something evil almost a year ago.  I was sitting on my couch, just enjoying my soda and the afternoon's warming glow.  Then, Cerberus, who has feet like a ninja, walked gingerly from the kitchen to the living room.  He then began to whine like the puppy he is.  After he stopped whining to my mom and walked up to me and looked at the bottle with giant, broad, ears and interest in his eyes; but Cerberus, being as crafty as a cat, I knew he wanted the soda bottle.

Cerberus can't catch cats, so I knew he couldn't catch the fly that was making that irritating buzzing noise near his triangular shaped ears.  After the fly went away, I got up and Cerberus got on the couch and sat down where I was just sitting.  Now, I finished the soda, and Cerberus being the puppy he is (which is weird, because he's half as tall as me) kept looking at the bottle.Then I could assume that his cute puppyish face hid his true identity, an evil cat. 

I knew because when he made his ears broad it gave him away.  He actually got closer, only paying attention to the bottle and sat down like a person and looked with seriousness.  But, I really wanted him to go away, or join some fray.  Instead, he just sat there and I thought, "what is this evil cat creature going to do?"

The only reason I was thinking it was because he looked ready enough to pounce and bite the bottle right out of my hand.  He then began to launch his attack.  I never thought this would happen, but  Ceberus was totally having a silent-scream.  He pounced and bit and used his claws to get the bottle, hurting me in the process.  He would stop for a few minutes and continue attacking me.  This actually occurred in short and long periods of time.  Eventually he slowed down and became lazy and then stopped. 

Soon he would follow the bottle while while I sat on the floor because he took my spot on the couch and hogged all the space.  So, I started to rethink about not giving him the bottle and started to think about actually letting him have it. But, my thoughts kept getting disrupted by Cerberus trying to bite at the bottle and getting my hand each time instead, making me bleed a little.  So, I made a compromise and put the bottle behind me so he couldn't get it, but he ended up digging his long claws in my shoulder and it really hurt for a while.  So, I gave Cerberus the bottle and he enjoyed it for a little bit, but my aunt's dog, that is staying with us, tried to take it from him.  They ended up fighting over it and hurt me in the process.  It went on for minutes; they growled, they threw themselves on the floor, and for some weird reason Ceberus started meowing like the evil cat he is.




Bullying PSA: Graphic Content, Please be Cautioned

Cool to Cruel: Bullying PSA
By: Kyarra Carpenter, Kamryn Haut, and Kara Westmoreland
2-09-2013


Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Walk A Mile In Me: Writing from the perspective of a shoe

Walk a Mile In Me
By: Haley Cano
2-12-2013


I'm a boot . . . a motorcycle boot, I'd say.  My owner wears me every time he rides his motorcycle, to show me off, or strut his stuff.  He wears me with his cool leather jacket - he's by best friend.  That leather jacket always tells me that he's better than me, but what can I say? That's just who he is.  I know I'm cool, because I get worn on special occasions.  And special occasions are for special boots.  Well, I think I'm special and so does my owner, when he shoves his big foot inside me, as I hold my breath for the stink bomb to blow.  And then I let go and wait for him to tie my laces up tight.  On our way out the door, I feel the fresh air in the night, and listen for the loud motor to start running.  That's when I know how good it feels to be my owner's boot . . . a special boot . . a  motorcycle boot.


Walk A Mile in Me
By: Aidan Sullivan
2-12-2013

I am a neon green and black shoe.  I am unique.  My owner has only seen two pairs like me.  He tried his hardest in me, no matter how many times he failed the mile run.  We go and ride a bike almost every day, but I don't mind.  Sometimes we accidentally play hide-and-seek, as he always loses me in some part of the house . . . he always wins.  I know in my sole, which is covered in layers of dust that apparently won't come off, that even though I am not the only size 10 shoe in the closet, no amount of mud, nerf wars, or whatever may be laying on the forest floor, can make me think I am not a unique little pair of neon green and pitch-black Nikes.


Walk a Mile in Me
By: JR Perez
2-12-2013

I've seen death more than anyone else in the world.  I've gone through bombings, shootings, and terrorist attacks.  I defend my owner from these dangerous things - without me, my owner wouldn't be here.  I keep his family safe and happy by bringing him home from these scary places.  It's a tough job, being me, but only the best can do what I do.  I'm woven with freedom and strength.  I'm strong enough to do anything that is needed of me.  I'm sometimes left in Afghanistan, being the dead man's shoe.  If it wasn't for me there wouldn't be any freedom at all.  I travel the world to make sure we can live in a free and happy world.

Friday, February 1, 2013

Mysteries Of Harris Burdick Stories

Under the Rug
By: Remington Froncek
1-29-2013


There once was an old man named Henry. Henry was a normal old man who worked at a carpet company. Then one day he decided to replace the carpet in his home. Little did he know what he brought into his house with the new carpet. After the carpet was finished, he went to bed, and then he heard . . . BANG! CRASH! BOOM! He rushed down stairs to see what it was.  He heard it again in the other room, BANG! CRASH! BOOM! He ran to the other room and nothing was there, so he finally went back to bed.  The next day he didn’t have to work, so he went to the library.  He was on the computer trying to find information about what he had heard the night before.  He found out that he had acquired the Ruggy-Buggy, with his ancient carpet from Persia.  He found that the only way to get rid of the Ruggy-Buggy was to leave a trail of Cheeze-its on the ground, leading to a bowl of milk.  So, he waited and waited.  Two weeks passed and it happened again.  The Cheeze-its were gone. The milk was gone.  There was a loud screech and a black figure opened the door and nobody ever saw or heard from the Ruggy-Buggy again.  Henry lived the rest of his life happy and normal.


The Harp
By: Patrick Peterson
1-29-2013


So it’s true, he thought, it’s really true, “it’s true!!!!”  They all screamed in fright and fear.  “It’s really true” said the man.  “What’s true?” said the boy. 
“It’s true that the harp down at the lake is playing its self.”
The boy and the man go to the lake to this scary, yet amazing scene.  “Could it be a ghost?” they said together.  “No, no, it can’t be,” they said.
The harp moved, there was a voice, the man and the boy were completely silent.  There was a distant voice speaking.  The voice said to them, “it is me the ghost, playing the harp.”
“Who are you?”  Shouted the boy.
“I was Edward Fidley.  I was the best musician in the world,” said Edward.
“What happened?” said the man.
“One night, after my concert, I was murdered.  So, now I’m here playing away my sorrows,” said the ghost.
The Man stepped up . . . “what is your last name again?”
“Fidley,” replied Edward.
“And where are you from?”
“Here,” said Edward. “My wife lives here still, in downtown.  Her name is Susan.”
The man looked shocked.  Staring at Edward, words finally came to the boy . . .
“Nice to meet you, Dad.”



Mr. Linden's Library
By: Celine Pandosy
1-29-2013


This is like any other day, I work at my deceased uncle’s library, I get lunch, go home, and do whatever.  Yet, this day was odd.  As I looked around in my uncle’s storage for old books, I came across a white book with gold patterns.  I picked it up and looked at it . . . Blank Pages . . . I thought that maybe it was a scrapbook, so I put it on the shelves in the library.  Nobody seemed interested in it.  I went home after my job was done.
Now my grandma was a superstitious woman.  When I told her about the book, she freaked!  “Don’t let anyone get that book!”  and then she left. . .
How funny she said this, because a girl of about my age walked into the little library and immediately found interest in the book.  I looked at the book nervously.  “Are you sure you want the book?”  The girl nodded, “Positive!”  I slowly gave her the book and she took it.  “Just be very care . . .” and then she was gone.  I hope she is okay.
_  _  _  _  _
So, now it’s been three days since the accident took place . . . oh right . . . I didn’t tell you.  It was said that that girl was found tangled in some poisonous vine or plant – and the book . . . well, it was there too.  I warned her about the book, now it’s too late.