Students worked in groups to complete these poems and then created a final poem as a class.
Welcome to a glimpse into the wonderful world of Mrs. Oqueli's classroom! This blog is a compilation of exceptional student work that my learners have produced. We hope you enjoy experiencing the things we learn and create as much as we enjoy the growth and wisdom that comes along with engaging in each activity.
Monday, April 28, 2014
Thursday, April 24, 2014
A Remarkable Adventure - Based on the poem by Jack Perlutzky
A
Remarkable Adventure
By:
Alexa Hurlburt
I was in my living room
About to head to bed
Until I got the feeling I was being followed
Ah, it was all in my head
So I laid down, and shut my eyes
Until I heard a noise across my room
My eyes opened suddenly, no sudden
movements
This was it, this was my doom
I got up slowly, to see what it was
I grabbed my lamp, ready to fight
The noise getting louder
My mom then walked and turned on the light
I looked where the noise was coming from
It was my homework being torn up by me
brother
I was ready to scream at him
But all I got was yelled at by my mother
And that’s why I don’t have my phone for a
week
A
Remarkable Adventure
By:
Allyson Vondran
I was in the park
Our puppy by my side
The trees began to change
With teeth that opened wide
They creaked and croaked
As they slowly stood
Time slowed but they were quick
They groaned about a wooden hood
Then a lady made a steel
Smiled big and bright
Her metal teeth flashing in the night
“Come child I’ll show you wrong and right”
Our puppy barked and howled
Then we ran
The lady followed us
I whacked her with a pan
The trees were quick
They swallowed the puppy whole
They scared me down an alley
Where they grew two giant moles
Then they became trees once more
So mother that’s why puppy’s gone
I tried to save him
But my mind was in a smog
A
Remarkable Adventure
By:
Zack Smith
One day I was on a bench
Having juice and applesauce
When a man said to me
“I am now your boss”
He tome away
Put inside a place
Where it was do what you’re told
Or get a smack to the face
It really scared me
Thinking I’ll never see light
I wanted to give up now but then
Someone started a fight
I got an idea
So I snuck out and got away
I check the date and I was there all night
That’s why I don’t have my homework today
Monday, April 21, 2014
Poems for Two Voices
Home
A
Poem for Two Voices
By:
Isaak Mongubat and Serinity Buchanan
On the walk are
Written words I shouldn’t
Speak
Living
Around
the beautiful
Flowers
that contain a
Sweet
scent
Almost
Not too safe to
Live in
Remarkable
Sights
I’ve never
Seen
before
But
it’s alright
Because
it’s my home
He’s
Gone
A
Poem for Two Voices
By:
Sydnie Yager and Jessie Seeley
All the memories
Without
him
Remembering
some
Of
him
Missing
him
At my birthday
Always gone
Wondering
When
he’s
Coming
home
Been
Two
months
On
my own
I
love you
Come
home
Light
A
Poem for Two Voices
By:
Trevelle Jones and Isaiah Saunders
I love the light
I
wish it would disappear
I’m glad it’s here
I
would die if I came near
Sunlight
It fills me with delight
And
gives me fright
I’d rather be in the sun
And
I prefer the night
I’m going to try with
All my might to get you
To love
Sunlight
Pigs
and Elephants
A
Poems for Two Voices
By:
Dante Belandres and David Rice
I hate pigs
I
hate elephants
I
hate you
Pigs are pink
Elephants
are blue
I
hate colors
So
do you?
You’re little
You’re
fat
Hey!
Hey
what?!
You’re muddy
You’re
wrinkly
I
hate mud
And
skin
You do?
Yup!
You want to be friends?
Yeah
FRIENDS!
Bird
and Worm
A
Poem for Two Voices
By:
Jay Miller
Flying high in the air
Looking for prey
Hiding
underground . . .
Checking
to see if the
Cost
is clear
What’s that?
I think I see
My dinner
I
think death is
Approaching
I’m going for the kill
Gotta
crawl back
Into
my hole
I’m gonna make it
I
can’t make it
Going in for it
NOOO!!!
GULP
That was tasty
I
knew I
Couldn’t
make it
What
I Like About You
A
Poem for Two Voices
By:
Rudy Paisley
What
I think
The most the
easiest to
Amazing face steel
from
What
I’d do
For
you
I’d jump in I’d
do anything
Front of a car to steel
For you your
money
What
I’d
Give
you
I’d give you I’ve give you
A million dollars two
I’d
love you
For
Ever 1
year
I’d
do anything
To
keep you
With me Tricked
Sensations
The
Sensations of Winter
By:
Cameron England
I sit by the fire
And stare out the window
I watch the snow fall from the sky
The snow stops for once
I stare at the sky hoping for more
These are the sensations of winter
I adore
Hoping for more I step outside
Waiting and waiting only to find
More
I sit on the steps watching
The kids play in the snow
I lay down knowing that’s
The last site I will see
These are the sensations of winter
I adore
The Boys Who Fought the Nazis: Found Poems
The
Boys Who Fought the Nazis
Found
Poem
By:
Dante Belandres
Bombs blowing
Children crying
Fear of dying
July 1914
World War II
Jews Killed
Millions were thrilled
Broken glass
Unemployment
High
More like let’s
All die
Suicide
No capture
Warned
53 million lives
Were taken
Beaten by the
Time WWII was done
Germans
Vs. Nazis
Found
Poem
By:
Albert Aguilar
Dark and terrifying
Hamburg Germany
British bombers looking to destroy
Dark and terrifying
Fear of bombs
Heart pounded
Swallowed vomit
Dark and terrifying
Hitler prejudice against
Jewish
Jewish
Outlandish beliefs
Dark and terrifying
Hitler destroying Germany
Nazi Germany
Change the course of life
Shadows
Dark and terrifying
The
Nazis
Found
Poem
By:
Casey Stophel
Fear of bombs
Nazi’s – - - Hitler
Power after difficulty
Jewish killed
Speech after speech
Invading
Can’t forget
The games end
Caught
Sentenced to death
Gestapo tortured
Now I must die even though I’ve committed
no crime
Final days
After it all
50 million dead
Hitler gone
The
Boys Who Fought the Nazis
Found
Poem
By:
Maiya Johnson
Dark
Terrifying
Destroyed homes
Fear
pounded into the heart
Of Germans as well as the people
Children
Trained to be soldiers
Resisters were
Captured, beaten, killed
Or tortured
Three friends
Criticizing
The war
Helmuth, Karl, Rudi
The boys who fought
The Nazis
I
Would Do It Again
Found
Poem
By:
Tamera Lepore
Now I must die
I have committed no crime
I would do it again
I am not a hero
I would do it again
They were to blame
They fanned the flame
They would be shut down
I would do it again
The games ended
Dark and terrifying
With targets to destroy
I would do it again
Yes, I would do it again
A
Nazi Rally
Found
Poem
By:
Rudy Paisley
Bombs a short wave
Do you know you’re being lied to
Racially pure
A Nazi rally
German Jews singled out
People, gypsies, gays
Click-clack of boots
A Nazi rally
Anti-Jewish people
Praise Hitler
A Nazi rally
Hitler embraced
A Nazi rally
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